"Screen" at Pboz
My short "Screen" is live at Pindeldyboz. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it's really short. I suggest you go read it and come back and tell me what it is.
Height: shorter than Elvis but taller than Johnny. Eyes: Fulfillingness' First Finale. Hair: sometimes. Build: Tower of Babel, Gormenghast, Temples of Syrinx. Subject to change without notice.
My short "Screen" is live at Pindeldyboz. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it's really short. I suggest you go read it and come back and tell me what it is.
posted by Dave at 12:47:00 AM
Do you know me? Read one of my stories. Will you know me then? I have blue eyes, but sometimes they are green. Does this help? I am older than The Electric Company but younger than Sesame Street. Have you figured it out yet?
7 Comments:
Excellent piece, Dave. I particularly like this:
"Inside, neatly folded, lay her unmentionables: silken prayers, elastic promises, lies without seams. Some are innocent and girlish, others are brazenly seductive."
The idea that this woman has brazenly seductive unmentionables, yet never lets the narrator see her wearing them, is quite a striking contrast. Well done.
Thanks, Pete.
Very nice, Dave. I liked this a lot.
Well, this won't help your categorization issues much, but I thought it was lovely.
Hey mister I already told you this but I'll say it again -- I liked your story. Especially the Kurosawa adapting C.S. Lewis part. Film geekery and fantasy geekery together! At last!
Nevermind.
Thanks, everybody! And Liz--as far as I'm concerned, "lovely" is a perfectly acceptable category :-)
i loved it. very nice work, Dave.
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