Wednesday, February 22, 2006

"Screen" at Pboz

My short "Screen" is live at Pindeldyboz. I'm not sure how to describe it, but it's really short. I suggest you go read it and come back and tell me what it is.


Anonymous Pete said...

Excellent piece, Dave. I particularly like this:

"Inside, neatly folded, lay her unmentionables: silken prayers, elastic promises, lies without seams. Some are innocent and girlish, others are brazenly seductive."

The idea that this woman has brazenly seductive unmentionables, yet never lets the narrator see her wearing them, is quite a striking contrast. Well done.

10:52 AM  
Blogger Dave said...

Thanks, Pete.

11:11 AM  
Blogger Jason Erik Lundberg said...

Very nice, Dave. I liked this a lot.

2:38 PM  
Anonymous Liz Gorinsky said...

Well, this won't help your categorization issues much, but I thought it was lovely.

4:09 PM  
Anonymous Meghan said...

Hey mister I already told you this but I'll say it again -- I liked your story. Especially the Kurosawa adapting C.S. Lewis part. Film geekery and fantasy geekery together! At last!


8:37 PM  
Blogger haddayr said...

Well, DAMN.

11:35 AM  
Blogger Dave said...

Thanks, everybody! And Liz--as far as I'm concerned, "lovely" is a perfectly acceptable category :-)

11:41 AM  
Blogger Elad said...

i loved it. very nice work, Dave.

5:31 PM  

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